lurker_of_note (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} lurker_of_note) wrote in kirili, |
*shocked*
I just read the word document and upon opening my web browser, see that you've already posted- heh. There were perhaps two grammar slips but otherwise the flow of the story wasn't a problem.
*out of beta mode*
This was an interesting moment shared between the two. I liked the movie references and whatnot.
"… Puppies makes me feel huge. He makes me feel small."
Odd yet true. Great line.
Ta.
I just read the word document and upon opening my web browser, see that you've already posted- heh. There were perhaps two grammar slips but otherwise the flow of the story wasn't a problem.
*out of beta mode*
This was an interesting moment shared between the two. I liked the movie references and whatnot.
"… Puppies makes me feel huge. He makes me feel small."
Odd yet true. Great line.
Ta.
